This is our final draft which is MUCH IMPROVED than the previous draft.
Once Shane was asked to improve all of the issues we had with the film, he came back within two days with our final draft!
Within such a short time he was able to get rid of most of the issues. I found it particularly impressive how he was able to cut the video down. I can still see certain issues with the continuity editing, but over all I’m very pleased with it, and with our work as a team.